6 thoughts on “Darkness Long

  1. “When time rings short
    But darkness is long
    And clings like mist around your soul”

    What a great beginning. I immediately fear death is imminent and feel cold and creepy in the night.

    “And clings like mist around your soul.”

    Very eloquent, descriptive, evoking fear.

    Chis,

    Do I understand this, or am I missing your point?

    Jim

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  2. Thank you, Jim, for both reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts on this. Death, indeed, although I also had in mind both depression and those naghinf, irrational fears that eat away at us.
    Thanks again, and I’m delighted that you liked this.

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