Rose-gold sunbeams set the autumn trees ablaze
under skies consumed by the pouring rain,
mind obscured in a silver haze.
I search for glimpses in the rearview mirror
and hold open the palms of my hand out the window
hoping to catch drops of nostalgia
that quench my soul like water.
I see drive by memories
strewn apart by the wind
and buried deep in muddy waters.
They swirl apart the tattered pages in my mind
but dissipate quickly on the tongue.
I try to capture phantoms in a glass bottle
but memories are not wine,
they don’t get richer as they age.
They haunt me,
and as seasons die
I try to dig up their bodies –
forever left
chasing ghosts.
© Copyright Samantha Rose 2018
You can catch more of Samantha existing at her blog, Existential Poetry.
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This is exceptionally beautiful! This is the kind of poetry I love to read, the kind that reminds me why I love language and what it does to my heart. This is the kind of poetry that makes me want to strive for more as a poet. I am in the memory, in the rain and the ache of being alive, but ever so softly.
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What an introduction! I am so proud to be a part of the kind of Literary collective that produces writing like this. An Exquisitely Beautiful piece!
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This is nice.
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Thank you ❤
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Welcome💖
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It’s so great to finally welcome you on board, Rose. You already know how much I love this poem. You make it look so ridiculously easy. We’re honored to share your work.
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Thank you! I could not be more excited to be a part of this community! You are all amazing both as people and writers.
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What a beautiful debut. Such imagery. I am wrapped around every line you write. Truly remarkable writing.
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Welcome on board. I’ll be haunted by this poem for a long time. Stunning.
What a debut.
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words and warm welcome, and I hope you know that I always enjoy reading your writing as it comes out.
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Beautiful imagery with a hint of melancholy – a fine poem indeed!
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Thank you, Chris! you always have such kind things to say. I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
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I did and you’re welcome.
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I really felt the longing in this poem, that desperation to keep hold of something you know is dissolving. The power of the imagery is so refined here. Nicely done!
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Thanks so much, Maggie! That means a lot coming from an amazing writer such as yourself! You got the meaning I was trying to relay exactly right. Thanks for your comment!
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My pleasure Samantha. And thank you ☺️
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This is beautiful and the title is superb!!👏
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Thank you so much! I appreciate you stopping by 🙂
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If you have read some of my comments on posts by Wulf, Susan, Bojana and Maggie, you would know that imagery in poetry is so important to me. With that said, your imagery is phenomenal. “Glimpses in the rearview mirror”, “tattered pages in my mind”, “phantoms in a glass bottle”, “I try to dig up their bodies”…
Wow! Just wow! Thank you for showing me how beautiful poetry can be. ☺
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Thank you so much! I find myself drawn to imagery as well – there’s something about using words in the abstract that leaves a lot of room for creativity, and I love that about poetry. I’m very glad you appreciated it!
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You’re very welcome ☺
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