Salmon sunset cracks open
the celestial skull of the desert like an egg,
pouring light in the empty space
that kisses the mountain ridges.
Sagebrush grabs pools of glittering sand
between its greedy roots.
Droplets of sunlight leap from the ground
as if violently repelled by earth’s core,
filling up the atmosphere
like a golden goblet, as the bolting,
ethereal silhouette of a jackrabbit
drinks up the drops of light like fine wine.
Here, emptiness has more gravity than matter,
vacuities ablaze,
vacancies illuminated,
voids dazzling brilliance.
Light exists solely in cracks and crevices,
spaces unpossessed by mass,
uncontaminated by substance,
let alone by presence.
So we drain ourselves of sorrow like a sinkhole
and abandon baggage on the dusty trails.
And with nothing blotting out the path before us,
we race the sun on the long drive home.
© Copyright Samantha Rose 2018
You can catch more of Samantha existing at her blog, Existential Poetry.
Oh my god, this is alight with so much Gorgeous imagery! It is exactly what this part of the world feels like, but you give it texture in a brand new way. You have some serious range! Beautiful, Beautiful work!!!!
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Thank you so much, Susan! That is so kind of you to say. I thought it was about time for an uplifting poem, right? 🙂
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Feels like home to me……so beautiful!
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I was transported by this.
Every word pulled me west, away from the soggy swamplands of where I am to the beautiful place written about in this poem.
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Thank you, Wulf! It was inspired by a little adventure I had going on a road trip to dig for sunstones. It gave me such a different perspective.
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I heart this! Especially these lines:
“Here, emptiness has more gravity than matter,
vacuities ablaze,
vacancies illuminated,
voids dazzling brilliance.”
This poem calms my tortured soul. Beautiful work, Rose. I agree with Susan – You always honor us with something different.
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Thank you so very much! As usual, getting positive feedback from such a wonderful writer means a lot. It was about time for something light-hearted, I think. I love the diversity that MP allows 🙂
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You’re very welcome. Yes, you have impeccable timing.
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This is a beautifully descriptive poem which evokes the scene wonderfully. I was hooked at your opening line. Excellent writing.
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Thank you, Chris! You always do such a wonderful job creating beautiful and uplifting imagery, so that means a lot.
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You’re welcome…and thank you too!
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Yes!!!!! That opening line is perfection!
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A well crafted and marvelously accurate portrait of the stark beauty of the desert. Well done.
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Thank you, Barbara! It is a unique place, for sure!
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Dazzling brilliance, Sam. Much different from everything I’ve read from you and I’m in love with this change.
Kudos.
Don’t keep us waiting this much…
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I know, I know, you’re right – I’ve totally been MIA. I need a day to just soak in some inspiration and write without getting distracted.
Thank you so much for the compliment! And i am still completely in love with your recent piece – you know I have a soft spot for social justice related poems.
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Yes, I do. As I said, nth thrills me half as much.
So happy to see u back.
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Reblogged this on Existential Poetry.
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Your words made me feel like I was right there. That, my dear Samantha, is what poetry is supposed to do. There was no second guessing of what your words meant, there was just a beautiful knowing. The beauty of simplicity. ☺
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Thank you, Walt! That means so much! I was definitely aiming for simplicity with this one – I’m so glad you liked it!
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You’re very welcome ☺
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I love this. Everything everyone else has said! 😊
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Thank you so much!
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Hello,
Will you like to inspire women at http://www.fuzia.com by writing a guest blog. Fuzia is a website to showcase female talent globally and i feel your write ups will definitely make a difference in someone’s life.
Regards
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Hello! Thank you so much for the compliment! That sounds lovely! What type of writing are you looking for?
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What can I say? I mean, seriously? Nothing.
About a third of the way in I feel you shift with this, fall into it like you’re saying “I know this” and then you run your mouth like you’re spewing aurora borealis in the night sky and it ‘ain’t no thang’. I’ve said it from the get go and I’ll say it again “I knew her when…”
Well done!!
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