Dreams fall down like shadows slow
Can’t stop them now, can’t even try,
I feel them shroud me like a curse
Can’t see behind a clouded eye.
These tremors take my sweated hand
Can’t shake them off, can’t cut them loose,
I feel them chill my aching bones
Can’t rid myself, a waiting noose.
They drag me through mistakes I’ve made
Can’t justify, or reason why,
They show me futures drowned in pain
Can’t close my ears to other’s sighs.
Devils dance and duel within
Can’t stop the tune, can’t still the sound
A masquerade, no end in sight
Can’t hide my face or go to ground.
Voices call inside me now
Can’t make my own be heard instead,
They pull me into depths unknown
Can’t heal the scars inside my head.
Dogs are barking at the walls
Can’t silence them or stop their call,
They speak to me my greatest fears
Can’t hide from them, can’t hide at all.
And dreams fall down like shadows still
Can’t stop them now, can’t ask for more,
I feel them shroud me like a curse
Can’t see beyond the gaping door.
© All original writing copyright Chris Nelson 2018
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Wow, Chris. The rhythm alone of this one is wonderful. I don’t recall one so dark from you as this. I am sure they are out there, just I haven’t read them. I love the way it shows the depth of your skills and showcases the darker side.
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I’d like to think that they are! Sometimes, I think, certain poems call put for a rythmic verse structure, so I’m delighted that you felt that this was effective. Many thanks.
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It really was, and I love seeing the difference in styles from you.
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Again, you have my thanks.
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Wow! Powerful! Awesome imagery … and very sad.
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Covered all the bases for you then! Thank you, I appreciate your comments.
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An excellent piece of writing.
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Thank you, I’m pleased that you liked this, and I appreciate your feedback.
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A vivid combination of rhyme, metaphor, and imagery steeped in sadness…felt it bone deep. Well done, Chris. 👏👏👏
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I’m pleased that this resonated with you. Thank you.
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My pleasure reading. 🙂
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Can’t close the ears to other’s sighs.
I love this, Chris.
I love the tune, the rhythm and the sounds that feel like rain tapping on the window, restless and beautiful.
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I am really pleased that you could ‘hear’ the melody in this piece, B – I was aiming for more of a lyric. Lovely to know that you enjoyed this too. Thanks for your kind words.
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You’re very welcome.
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In love with this one – it does seem to have a beautiful dark air to it. And just like everyone else, I must praise this remarkable rhythm. Well done, Chris!
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Thank you, Samantha, it’s lovely that you found beauty in the darknesd. I appreciate your comments.
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