There will have been a night
that sat on a house
with no fence
where the stars came in
A night made of lightning, like a flash
that tore from between two legs,
switched off the lights,
and crowded the walls
with neighbors like a speakeasy,
a room with a shot glass for an eye,
two wooden arms and a stump,
a night like house, a house like a body,
a sky like two clouds trapped in a wine bottle,
a pop in a cork where the moon came in
There will have been a man with big dreams
and woman who only wanted flowers,
a waiter and a pool boy
and a cluster of mothers comparing jeans
and Napa Valley Chardonnays
And there will have been children
who curled up with their babysitters
and slept to the buzz of the gnats
and the beat of the fireflies
that never stopped dancing
while their parents went down to the carpets,
down to the knees of the house,
down to the mats made of silk
and the smell of the wood and
they flung their bras against the naked walls
and traded bourbon with their friends
and husbands with their wives
and ate cake out of each other’s hands
while no one else was watching
And there will have been an uncertain ending
involving a man who bailed a boat
as big as a foot and sailed
as if from a distant island
to the storm of storms,
to the source of the lightning,
and clasped the hand
of all things unafraid, and built
the dam that stopped the flood
that saved the fence
that surrounded the yard
of the little white house made of stars
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Wow…just wow. What an amazing introduction. There is a sheen, a polish to this that has me seriously considering breaking all me keyboards. This incredible. I love the flow through it and into the ending.
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Haha…thank you so much! I had a lot of fun writing this one, and I’m glad it translated. 🙂
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It so did. You are most welcome.
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It’s not every day you read a poem in the future perfect prophet tense. Both removed from the eerie trials and the heroic outcome, the voice is just telling us to brace ourselves, but fear not. Great job.
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You’ve gotten it exactly. Thank you.
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I love the tense, the imagery, the flow.
Absolutely perfect (what an intro!)
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Thank you very much, Bojana! I am happy to be here 🙂
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So glad to have you here. I can’t wait to read more of you.
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What a colossal vision. Such control. Such beautiful language. I can hear Morgan Freeman reading this. – Amazing introduction!
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Morgan Freeman…what a compliment! Thank you 🙂
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You’re very welcome. 🙂
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I love the structure of this!
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Thank you!
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